**EFFECTIVE JUNE 1, 2026***
Services and Pricing
Developmental Editing
- $0.018/word
- 4 weeks/round
Developmental editing analyzes the foundation of a book and strives to ensure every beat has the right impact, that every conflict increases the stakes. Here, we’ll grab the reader with strong world-building, unforgettable characters, and a plot that makes them turn the page.
During this editing stage, my feedback will address character motivation and development, plot flow, worldbuilding, and character voice. I also review sentence structure and grammar, both in line and in comments.
What’s included:
- Marked document with comments and in-line track changes
- Detailed editorial summary
- Optional revision round, subject to availability
Line and Copy Editing
- $0.012/word
- 4 weeks/round
Line/Copy editing focuses on how the story is told to improve reader immersion. Here, I tighten up the prose by removing repetitive language and information, and smooth the sharp transitions. I watch for head-hopping narrators and teleporting characters, all while making sure commas are where they’re supposed to be.
What’s included:
- Marked document with comments and in-line track changes
- Detailed editorial summary
- Optional revision round, subject to availability
- Style sheet (upon request)
Proofreading
- $0.005/word
- 2-week turnaround
Proofreading is the final stage of the editing process, where punctuation, typos, and misspellings are caught and the story is given a polish before it’s off to formatting and publishing.
What’s included:
- Marked document with comments and in-line track changes
Manuscript Critique
- $0.008/word
- 2 -week turnaround
The manuscript critique is a good option for those who aren’t sure what their story needs, especially if they’re deciding between Developmental or Line Editing. I read your manuscript and take detailed notes on plot, world-building, and character development. I also pay attention to grammar patterns and sentence structure, as well as frequently appearing issues, such as dangling modifiers and repetition.
This service does not include any work within the document. You will receive a detailed editorial letter with my findings.
Authors interested in booking with me after receiving a manuscript critique will receive 20% off their service for that book.
If you’re interested in working together and would like to see a sample of my work, please send the first five pages of your manuscript to redloopediting@gmail.com.
The Editing Process
- The Sample Edit: I recommend new clients receive a sample edit so we can determine whether we’re a good fit for each other. My sample edits are free and of the first five pages of your story. You can contact me for a sample here. (hyperlink Contact page)
- Before the Edit: We’ll discuss timelines, expectations, and any concerns or questions you have about your story. If you’re choosing Developmental or Line Editing, we will also discuss whether you would like to do the included second round. Before your start date, I’ll reach out for final details and confirmation.
- The Edit: I work in Google Docs and Word. During the editing process, I will read and mark your manuscript based on the service we decided on, then send it back upon completion, along with a detailed editorial letter.
- After the Edit: I am available for questions during your revision process.
- Optional Second Round: Developmental and Line Editing services include an optional second round. If you choose this option, we will discuss a time frame for you to review and apply any of my feedback and return the file for its second round of edits.
Payment
Two invoices are sent out, one before I start and one with the last round of edits. I do not start work until the first invoice, which is half the total payment, is paid.
Qualifications
- 7+ years of editing experience
- BA in English and Creative Writing
- MFA in Popular Fiction Writing and Publishing
- additional Copyediting course completed
Victoria Basnuevo 